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///that's some electricity you got there D:<



had fun making teh lighting effex and angreh rath background @___@

so yeah this comic has 15 pages total and i'll be releasing them in sets of three (was going to five but I wanted to at least get something out there)

so yeah I'm going to be working on this a lot in the next couple weeks :3 not that I haven't been already @____@ OTL

oh yeah and dialogue is a bit iffy lol @___@
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I guess I could comment this here about all of the pages? xD
Well, these pictures are really cool. I like the way you make the clouds and the background (Which is not possible for me to make it ;A; ). And the Lightning effect too, how did you do it!? ;A;. Also, the black and white coloring is really great.
So uh, do you draw with a tablet, or with mouse, or with paper and then you scan it and make the line arts on the computer? ^^ Well, I think people use these 2 ways to do it:
1. They draw them completely traditional OwO (Pencil, Ink and... B&W Color paper? lol I dunno what it is xD) OR Make the drawings with ink and then edit some stuffs on the computer with PTS or SAI
2. They draw them with pencil, and then they scan it to the computer, they make line art of it and do the rest too.
Well I suggest you should try the 2nd way to do it (like I did) with Paint Tool SAI :D. So paint tool SAI has the most awesome tools to make line arts out from sketches (even if it takes time). You do it with mouse and you can change the pressure of the lines by a tool (called: "Pressure") too. And that's how I made my Line arts :iconhappydeathstareplz:. But actual Professionals use only tablet (And They make the drawings look great that way =,= )
And there's something too about the characters xD. Well... I think they look a bit like boys ^^; I think you could try to draw their noses a bit higher and let them have longer eyelashes. And maybe you can draw the hair a bit more detailed too, it look... hard D: There's many great tutorials on dA too
And that maybe is all I wanted to say xD, umm I hope you don't feel bad or anything, I'm really sorry if you do and I can not even make a comic more than 2 pages xD (I usually give up at page 2 lol). Keep up the great works! And don't forget that, Practice makes perfect! xD.

(The Lightning really IS cool, how did you do that? D8, And do you have Photoshop, Sai or both? :3 (Gosh, did I ask you this... bad memory x.x)